Wednesday, July 20, 2005

those among us who know

Those among us who know what it is
that really seperates the soul from the body,
and what breaths courage into the hearts
of those who stand stout and witness
the afflictions of their ambitions;
How words come to life
as they are taken of the paper
and into the flames of fractured humanity
to yeild the notions of new a ideology.

Those among us who know how it is
the billegerent pain of the night,
the contemplating lonliness,
striking on the wooden walls,
and beating into the chest
without a glass of carmine.

Those among us who know what it is
that keeps a phantom awake till dawn,
lets him past the barriers of muse,
unemerge through the sees of thought,
and then lets him stand lost staring
the human sentiments blossom
under the iron bridges of civilisation.

Those among us who know what it is
know for sure it is not the necessity,
its not the reaction of chemicals in self,
and not just a raga of rationality.
They will never name it so
the bridges of iron civilisation
would not collapse.


Wow I really dont know how to write!!

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

Ideas just like sperms, if let out prematurely or without absolute clarity may result in a deformed fetus or no fetus at all. with the clarity of Idea come clear and inciting metaphors, metaphors cannot be thought out, they come, just like arrousal that cannot be instilled but just takes over. "flames of fractured humanity"?

second stanza is good.

third is unclear

and the fourth has lost touch with the rest.

Vincent said...

This gentleman right right here clearly has erection issues.

Anonymous said...

that is precisely what my point was....erection occurs..responding to some stimulus....that thing down there cannot use cluches from obvious reason.

Vincent said...

This gentleman's name (Abdul Raheem) somehow suggests that he may explode for no apparent reason!

Vincent said...

testesterone blindness? Isnt it the same when a person's eyes are coverd with balls?

Anonymous said...

no no its when testes start seeing...

Vincent said...

I dread that day. After you started seeing throuh your testicles there was only one dark circle under your new eyes (the old eyes had two).